Narrative Text
The Fox and the Grapes
There was once a fox with an
empty stomach, who went in search for food. Then he saw a vineyard,
where large bunches of golden grapes hung from the vines above his head.
The fox jumped up and down,
trying to bite into a bunch of the grapes, but he failed. He tried again
and again, with all his might, but he still failed to reach the grapes.
suddenly, he thought a way for picking the wine. Then he found a pole, and he took the pole and try to pick the wine they want. As he was about to pick the wine, he suddenly struck by a farmer. The farmer is the owner of the vineyard, and the fox was trying to run backwards to escape the farm. Soon the fox was back picking grapes, but the farmer still chase and eventually caught the fox. Finally, the fox was introduced into the cage near the vineyard. Shortly thereafter, the wine was speaking to the fox the fox was surprised. The wine was asked "Why a fox that wanted to pick me?" Then the fox said, "I'm starving, I do not have food anymore so I came here to pick grapes for food." The wine was also felt pity and eventually he was willing to be quoted and used as food by the fox.
Finally the fox get the grapes and tried to get out of the cage the farmer, the farmer is a slept thankfully and finally the fox fled and returned to his home to eat the delicious grapes.
veni, you should be consistent, you use simple past tense for two paragraphs. what happened with the last paragraph? it should be in the form of simple past tense. plese revised it if you mind, then you'll get extra score.
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